Really admire your effort to animate the character, I think you did a good job considering everything about it...from the proportions of the character, to the shadow, etc. Looks nice. Only wish the text at the end wasn't pixelated.
I really like your PSA. We both felt the pain of character animation and I really love how it's coming along. I feel like you already know that the animation is a bit choppy, the girl in the mirror is missing her mouth, the shadows a bit wonky etc. and I hope you're still working on smoothing out the bugs as I am :) Though I really enjoy the music and the visuals are extremely cute! Great job :)
^ I agree the shadow is a little fast, but animation is extremely difficult so I commend you for doing it!! The type reading "smile because you are beautiful" is a little blurry, but I'm not sure if there is a way to fix this while still zooming in smoothly. Overall I agree with and love the message. Great job!
This looks great so far! I know that taking on animation brings a ton of difficulties. So I agree, great effort in bringing your character to life! I love the transition of dropping down into the scene from the sky. Keep working at it though! I think it just needs some tweaking here and there. Love the music, and illustrations though. Keep up the great work!
Did a good job in animating your character and creating an environment. The shadow was really well done as well. The text at the end was little out of focus so I think that sharpening that up would definitely improve the video
I love your character and your message! It is so important to remember your self-worth. There are some technical issues that others have discussed above, and I think you could just keep working on this to really perfect it. I know this character rigging stuff is hard! Maybe add the Dove logo to the end? Good job!
Really admire your effort to animate the character, I think you did a good job considering everything about it...from the proportions of the character, to the shadow, etc. Looks nice. Only wish the text at the end wasn't pixelated.
ReplyDeleteI really like your PSA. We both felt the pain of character animation and I really love how it's coming along. I feel like you already know that the animation is a bit choppy, the girl in the mirror is missing her mouth, the shadows a bit wonky etc. and I hope you're still working on smoothing out the bugs as I am :) Though I really enjoy the music and the visuals are extremely cute! Great job :)
ReplyDeleteThis is great! Character animation is difficult and you pulled it off really well.
ReplyDelete^ I agree the shadow is a little fast, but animation is extremely difficult so I commend you for doing it!! The type reading "smile because you are beautiful" is a little blurry, but I'm not sure if there is a way to fix this while still zooming in smoothly. Overall I agree with and love the message. Great job!
ReplyDeleteThis looks great so far! I know that taking on animation brings a ton of difficulties. So I agree, great effort in bringing your character to life! I love the transition of dropping down into the scene from the sky. Keep working at it though! I think it just needs some tweaking here and there. Love the music, and illustrations though. Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteDid a good job in animating your character and creating an environment. The shadow was really well done as well. The text at the end was little out of focus so I think that sharpening that up would definitely improve the video
ReplyDeleteI know character rigging is really tough so I'll say good job and it's a good first attempt at learning that technique!
ReplyDeleteI love your character and your message! It is so important to remember your self-worth. There are some technical issues that others have discussed above, and I think you could just keep working on this to really perfect it. I know this character rigging stuff is hard! Maybe add the Dove logo to the end? Good job!
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